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Post by Joseph Fieldstone on Sept 17, 2012 9:35:11 GMT
The following is my take on the ode form. The form was used by many lyrical poets throughout the years. A famous example would John Keats. But unlike the traditional ode, the following poem is one stanza rather than three. The rhythm is that of iambic pentameter and the rhyme scheme goes like this: ababcdecde. Enjoy.
Nirvana Tempera On Silk
O day I have not lost you, for I stand In silence at your marriage vows to night. Tis dusk as Venus shines above a land That mourns and yearns the near abandoned light. The pale moon flickers while the nightingale Conducts a choir that croon the wedding tunes - Mellifluous old marches as you arrive With grace in seraph-knitted silk. The veil You wear has sheltered stars the shepherd soon Wont seek - they are the stars on which I thrive -
Joseph Fieldstone
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Post by secretly_broken on Sept 17, 2012 21:25:08 GMT
I really enjoyed that poem Joseph. Your imagery is really fantastic!
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Post by Joseph Fieldstone on Oct 17, 2012 11:32:02 GMT
Sorry there was a typing error in the above draft of the poem. One of its lines was being confused with another poem. Here is the proper draft:
Nirvana Tempera On Silk
O day I have not lost you, for I stand In silence at your marriage vows to night. Tis dusk as Venus shines above a land That yearns for the almost abandoned light. The pale moon flickers while the nightingale Conducts a choir that croon the wedding tunes - Mellifluous old marches as you arrive With grace in seraph-knitted silk. The veil You wear has sheltered stars the shepherd soon Wont seek - they are the stars on which I thrive -
Joseph Fieldstone
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Post by Joseph Fieldstone on Oct 17, 2012 11:34:32 GMT
Sorry, there is a mistake in the above draft. One of the lines was being confused with another poem. Here is the intended draft: Nirvana Tempera On Silk O day I have not lost you, for I stand In silence at your marriage vows to night. Tis dusk as Venus shines above a land That yearns for the almost abandoned light. The pale moon flickers while the nightingale Conducts a choir that croon the wedding tunes - Mellifluous old marches as you arrive With grace in seraph-knitted silk. The veil You wear has sheltered stars the shepherd soon Wont seek - they are the stars on which I thrive - Joseph Fieldstone Read more: els.boards.net/index.cgi?board=poetry&action=display&thread=7#ixzz29YSrtSAn
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